Crush
after use
after aching, thirsting, wanting
no more
use, crush
throw
use, crush
throw
after aching, thirsting, wanting
no more
use, crush
throw
use, crush
throw
posted by kaaju katli | 6:16 PM
posted by kaaju katli | 6:16 PM
8 Comments:
funny how an old plastic bottle can trigger some powerful lines. *hugs* back, miss you. :)
Heyy... came to your blog through the comment you left on Ammani's. Love the poetry - nice and minimalist, just the kind I like. :)
I like this blog. quite unrelatedly, the poetry is like i used to write some years ago! loved the diary one best...
spilling peanuts by the roadside! good on ya!
:)
cheers!
ramya
ammani - thank you, always!
shyam - glad you like them.
none - thanks so much.
loved the lines
the plastic bottle i agree
but so much more that one uses, crushes and throws
from feelings to people
i see it everyday
and wonder...
keep in touch
anu - it wasn't so much about the bottle, this one. do keep in touch too.
i have developed a crush on you,your blog and short poetry.
Brilliantly captured... I love the way you can point to something and talk about something else altogether.. :-) Very nice. I couldn't help clucking and smiling!
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