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Friday, June 03, 2005

Met

a flashback
in black and white;
knuckles pressed
against a face
white,
tear across the lip
black.

14 Comments:

Anonymous Tangent said...

Abuse?

Very stark...like a b& w picture

3:36 AM  
Anonymous abe said...

picturesque

2:15 PM  
Anonymous tjsnathan@yahoo.com said...

i build my life everyday,
with a vision of the future,

i commit or omit,
only if i see, in future,
that a compartment need not be reserved/hidden, rather kept
unreserved general public.

i live happily ever after :)

i have been told,
that i live more for others than
for me..
yes, i would reply.. after all i am a social being
not a solitary reaper :)

3:55 PM  
Blogger ammani said...

Very very disturbing. I hear what has been left unsaid. Brilliant.

3:59 PM  
Blogger trv said...

nice

8:39 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Sandai Kaatshi.

5:09 PM  
Blogger Arch Storm said...

this may be wat it feel like to be knocked silly!

8:01 AM  
Blogger Anjali said...

HEY KK,
Came here thru jikku's blog.all poems are short crisp and cute.

8:40 AM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

So many different ways of looking at this one.

Tangent, abe, tjsnathan, ammani, trv, anonymous, arch storm, a - Thank you all so much for your comments. Am truly overwhelmed.

10:57 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

came here a few days back from ammani's
hv been checking regularly to see if any new ones have been added
take ur time...

today's visit yielded ur pic - like a bubbly teenager wld say "cho chweet" ;-)

love all ur poems
an observation/pov on the poem "Used"
could hv been more powerful if those last 3 lines were not there

keep writing

i_f

3:44 PM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

Anonymous - Thank you. Would love to post more often, but. Do keep coming by though. Your feedback and comments do matter.

4:47 PM  
Blogger Shyam said...

Time for new pomes, plizz :)

7:53 PM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

shyam-yesmam!

7:58 PM  
Anonymous shyam said...

heheh... :)

11:00 PM  

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