Met
a flashback
in black and white;
knuckles pressed
against a face
white,
tear across the lip
black.
in black and white;
knuckles pressed
against a face
white,
tear across the lip
black.
posted by kaaju katli | 10:45 PM
12 Comments:
Abuse?
Very stark...like a b& w picture
picturesque
i build my life everyday,
with a vision of the future,
i commit or omit,
only if i see, in future,
that a compartment need not be reserved/hidden, rather kept
unreserved general public.
i live happily ever after :)
i have been told,
that i live more for others than
for me..
yes, i would reply.. after all i am a social being
not a solitary reaper :)
Very very disturbing. I hear what has been left unsaid. Brilliant.
Sandai Kaatshi.
HEY KK,
Came here thru jikku's blog.all poems are short crisp and cute.
So many different ways of looking at this one.
Tangent, abe, tjsnathan, ammani, trv, anonymous, arch storm, a - Thank you all so much for your comments. Am truly overwhelmed.
came here a few days back from ammani's
hv been checking regularly to see if any new ones have been added
take ur time...
today's visit yielded ur pic - like a bubbly teenager wld say "cho chweet" ;-)
love all ur poems
an observation/pov on the poem "Used"
could hv been more powerful if those last 3 lines were not there
keep writing
i_f
Anonymous - Thank you. Would love to post more often, but. Do keep coming by though. Your feedback and comments do matter.
Time for new pomes, plizz :)
shyam-yesmam!
heheh... :)
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