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Thursday, June 23, 2005

Choking.

These carelessly
strung spaces
between
us.

10 Comments:

Blogger trv said...

'carelessly strung spaces' - nice, i like that.

8:44 PM  
Anonymous shyam said...

Beautiful phrase, that. "Careleslly strung spaces" - very evocative.

2:05 AM  
Blogger ammani said...

Exactly what trv and shyam have said before. Lovely phrase.

11:59 AM  
Blogger idli ideas said...

heheheh
what are these phrases or poems.

watever it is I like the idea

10:22 PM  
Anonymous abe said...

gasp! gasp!

(in a nice way)

2:46 PM  
Blogger thennavan said...

OT: I blogrolled you :-)

11:04 AM  
Blogger Anjali said...

am strung and moved by your verse.

5:35 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

lovely

but not the tooth ache one ;-(
is it ok to say so??

i_f

9:43 PM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

i_f - of course, it's okay to say you didn't like any or all of them.

thennavan -thank you for blogrolling me

idli ideas - i don't know what these are either ;-) but am glad you like them.

ammani, abe, anjali - :-)

9:57 AM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

and shyam too :-)

9:58 AM  

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