Sometimes
I wish I hadn't seen
what I saw,
at least then
I wouldn't have become
me at all.
what I saw,
at least then
I wouldn't have become
me at all.
posted by kaaju katli | 3:14 PM
posted by kaaju katli | 3:14 PM
13 Comments:
hmmm. tough call.
wish i hadn't, so i wouldn't be me?
or
if i hadn't, i wouldn't be me?
abe - depends on what you saw.
bangalore-theatre-tamil films...I somehow can't help thinking I know you, but this of course is the place for anonymous familiarity, so let that be. Liked what I saw here, on the whole. Writing in tense, compact lines is something I myself cannot do. wish I could. will come back for more.
true katili!Sometimes we see somethings and we are so helpless.Good one.
If you hadnt seen what you saw, you wouldnt be the you that you are... but would a different you necessarily have been a happier or better you? :)
*phew* (head spinning after that bit of pop-psychology) ;)
true.
my life in 5 lines
or shld i make that my excuses in 5 lines
where did i read this just yesterday
about an analogy to the movie sliding doors
maybe u and i are products of a parallel universe...
i_f
Seeing what you did and doing what you did...
It all Builds Character! - as Calvin's (Hobbes) Dad says!!
Me thinks this is one of your best ones.
Hmm...very nice but confused by the variety of strains this post seems to convey...is the emphasis on what was seen or on what you have become?
Kaashyapeya - thanks for dropping by and do come again. am glad you liked my unpoems.
anjali - thanks.
shyam - can't really say anything about what I might have become; happier, sadder, who knows?
i_f, anonymous, trv - thank you.
rs - let me confuse you further. both :-)
thanks for the comment...
Seeing stuff not wanted....sometimes changes things..very true ...very meaningful!!!
i love the way how the title becomes a part of your poem.
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