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Wednesday, June 29, 2005

Axed Tree

Would have stayed strong,
unbowed, defiant for years
if you hadn't come to pass;
instead, I am coiled
against a broken tile
waiting to wipe your
filthy arse.




Written for Shakespeare & Co. on the theme 'What if'.

13 Comments:

Blogger J. Alfred Prufrock said...

Should have come here before. I very much like your brevity. Haiku-like.

J.A.P.

5:43 PM  
Blogger Übermaniam said...

would you like to talk?

1:42 AM  
Blogger Übermaniam said...

then again, you don't say much. which is probably why you say a lot. cheers. damn good writing.

1:43 AM  
Blogger Übermaniam said...

nice. great knockout punch at the end. interesting style. will come again. tnks for dropping by. uber.

1:45 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

reminds me of this HUGE tree outside barton centre which got the axe :-((

i_f

7:15 PM  
Blogger ammani said...

Can it get better? Excellent!

10:39 AM  
Blogger Shyam said...

Fabulous, and I'm sure it can (and will) get better still! :)

7:28 PM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

J.A.P - Honoured!

dopppsy - looks like you answered your own question :) Thank you.

i_f - Did you see the beautiful one they recently felled near HSBC? If only trees could carry axes and chop people as they walk by! Asinine comment I know, but this is one thing that gets me *really* mad :(

Shyam, ammani - hope to get better so I could torture you guys a bit less :-)

10:36 AM  
Blogger Dan Husain said...

I loved this piece but when I read the others I felt you're a poet in a lazy sort of manner. Kind of give up just before you chisel a masterpiece thinking - 'who'd bother this is not what I wish to do anyways?' I may be wrong. Correct me if that be the case. My apologies if I have transgressed. :-)

11:01 PM  
Blogger suniti said...

Loved this one :) The most wonderful 'what if' :) I can see that this blog is going to be my fav haunt. Can't resist the humour.

4:32 PM  
Blogger zigzackly said...

Lovely!

12:09 AM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

Dan - won't call myself a poet at all ;-), but we spoke about this so won't elaborate here. thank you for your comments

Suniti, Zigzackly - thank you, honoured :)

4:15 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

oops that was manipal centre not barton centre in my previous comment

"Did you see the beautiful one they recently felled near HSBC?"
- they had ample(in my opinion) parking space outside hsbc why did they need to chop those beauties :-((

i_f

7:12 PM  

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