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Location: Mumbai, India


Wednesday, June 29, 2005

Chennai (formerly Madras)

mad, rash, heady days
of love, longing
lust, lost
like the beautiful
name you once had.

Written for a Caferati exercise on 'Cityscapes'.


Anonymous abe said...

very nice. love the gentle melancholic
thingie (forgive me, can't think of a better word)

7:14 PM  
Blogger trv said...

wonderful, really.
just a thought: maybe you could insert an 'and' after love, longing like this-
love, longing and lust
lost now,
like ...

but its your style. i hope you don't mind.

9:53 PM  
Blogger ammani said...

Like looking at an old photograph and remembering the smells. Nice work!!

1:49 PM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

trv - thanks! am not developing any style or anything; I don't mind at all.

ammani - we've been there, no?

abe - thanks

11:11 AM  

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