Chennai (formerly Madras)
mad, rash, heady days
of love, longing
lust, lost
now
like the beautiful
name you once had.
Written for a Caferati exercise on 'Cityscapes'.
of love, longing
lust, lost
now
like the beautiful
name you once had.
Written for a Caferati exercise on 'Cityscapes'.
posted by kaaju katli | 4:25 PM
4 Comments:
very nice. love the gentle melancholic
thingie (forgive me, can't think of a better word)
wonderful, really.
just a thought: maybe you could insert an 'and' after love, longing like this-
love, longing and lust
lost now,
like ...
but its your style. i hope you don't mind.
Like looking at an old photograph and remembering the smells. Nice work!!
trv - thanks! am not developing any style or anything; I don't mind at all.
ammani - we've been there, no?
abe - thanks
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