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Wednesday, August 03, 2005

Desperate

toes
curled at the
edge of a precipice;
body lurching
towards

nothingness.

10 Comments:

Anonymous abe said...

what do you do?

enjoy the ride?

be the strawberry?

10:18 AM  
Anonymous shyam said...

snapshot of a suicide

8:20 PM  
Blogger The ramblings of a shoe fiend said...

i wonder if that's what trapeze artists feel like?

9:07 PM  
Blogger Ink Spill said...

Waiting eagerly for your next post to make sure you're not trying out your experiments on yourself!

10:23 PM  
Blogger Heretic said...

An experiment in balance. Spelendid. Hope u enjoyed the flight. :)

1:52 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

eerie!!!

was just thinking of sending
depression,suicide,death
to ammani for her qts for charity
(jus feeling morbid i guess)

also reminds me of my near bungee experience-chickening out at the last second with toes curled on the platform
but the climb was good and the view too

i_f

6:37 PM  
Blogger ammani said...

eyes wide open
heart in mouth
looking 'very fair' at last?

9:55 PM  
Anonymous Tangent said...

I thought if women's toes curled...it meant just one thing!!

Maybe I have been fed on too many novels.

10:58 PM  
Blogger Saltwater Blues said...

LOl @ your username ...how on earth did u pick that?

Heretic: I'm tired of asking you buddy -- What'd u do with ur blog?

12:03 PM  
Blogger Aravind said...

Beautifully crafted. All the emotions crushed into few words. No, not just about suicide. Chilling that when we want something so badly, we tend to give up so everything so easily.

9:00 PM  

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