Rearranging
those moments in my head;
first becomes second,
second moves a few spaces
and some,
some stay stuck,
refusing to change places.
first becomes second,
second moves a few spaces
and some,
some stay stuck,
refusing to change places.
5 Comments:
It just passed on in a second, and it remained the first for years, till a split second pushed the second to a second.
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Therz nothing in the world that doesnt change, it is just a matter of time.
i can almost see them hesitate and shuffle and settle in their new places or stay firmly in their old ones
lovely...
i_f
fighting, fighting
to stay first,
but knowing,
nigglingly knowing,
there will be a shuffle,
and you,
you're not going to come up tops
(sorry if seems like a competitive poem, but it's actually a complimentary comment. verry verry nice)
Resilience of thought. ^_^ Summoning order can be quite taxing.
Hullo. My first time here. Been reading past posts. I especially liked the one entitled "Funny." It's a very real slice of life. ^_^
This one is cute too! :-)
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