Promises
"When we made love you used to cry
You said I love you like the stars above
I’ll love you till I die"
You are still alive.
You said I love you like the stars above
I’ll love you till I die"
You are still alive.
posted by kaaju katli | 11:20 AM
17 Comments:
simple. direct. deadly.
ouch, hurts even to read it.
after holding back for so long, i think i'll just give in to the temptation to say,
dire. direct. deadly.
I'd rather call it poignant. very. and yes, vicious :))
Am feelin ya sistah!!
Feelin yo pain yo!
Gal, you gettin good at this.
Peace!
Where do you hide when the words hit you between the eyes? No escaping this. Excellent.
and i gotta know how much you love the stars.
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My love used to tell me she would love me till EOL [End of Life]. I would tell her, it is till EOLdays.[for L stands for 50 in roman numerals].
I am. As are you. While you say the same to another.
really powerful lines....meaningful play of words!!!
Merci all of you :)
My calling card as promised :)
Leaving a comment on "Promises" - take a look.
JJ (to spare you the mystification of the Sherlockian one).
Oops! The previous one was meant to be on your latest post!
And in all that confusion forgot to say lovely poem!
Sounds like a rip off of Alanis Morisette's You Oughta Know.
"You said that you'd hold me until you died, til you died, but you're still alive..."
Anonymous - actually, it's a rip off of a Dire Straits song :-)
ouch!!
a love struck romeo...
singing a street song serenade..
laying everybody low...
with this love song that he made...
finds a convenient streetlight...
steps out of the shade, and says:
You and me, babe. How about it??
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