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Thursday, July 07, 2005

Promises

"When we made love you used to cry
You said I love you like the stars above
I’ll love you till I die"

You are still alive.

18 Comments:

Anonymous abe said...

simple. direct. deadly.

11:53 AM  
Anonymous Charu said...

ouch, hurts even to read it.

2:13 PM  
Anonymous abe said...

after holding back for so long, i think i'll just give in to the temptation to say,

dire. direct. deadly.

4:18 PM  
Blogger the still dancer said...

I'd rather call it poignant. very. and yes, vicious :))

6:38 PM  
Blogger Enchant said...

Hi,
nice words

9:22 AM  
Anonymous Tangent said...

Am feelin ya sistah!!
Feelin yo pain yo!
Gal, you gettin good at this.
Peace!

10:08 PM  
Blogger ammani said...

Where do you hide when the words hit you between the eyes? No escaping this. Excellent.

11:28 PM  
Blogger TJ said...

and i gotta know how much you love the stars.
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My love used to tell me she would love me till EOL [End of Life]. I would tell her, it is till EOLdays.[for L stands for 50 in roman numerals].

1:08 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I am. As are you. While you say the same to another.

11:46 PM  
Blogger sharana said...

really powerful lines....meaningful play of words!!!

7:55 AM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

Merci all of you :)

4:16 PM  
Blogger SPECKLED_BAND said...

My calling card as promised :)

Leaving a comment on "Promises" - take a look.

JJ (to spare you the mystification of the Sherlockian one).

7:29 AM  
Blogger SPECKLED_BAND said...

Oops! The previous one was meant to be on your latest post!

7:31 AM  
Blogger SPECKLED_BAND said...

And in all that confusion forgot to say lovely poem!

7:34 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Sounds like a rip off of Alanis Morisette's You Oughta Know.
"You said that you'd hold me until you died, til you died, but you're still alive..."

4:43 PM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

Anonymous - actually, it's a rip off of a Dire Straits song :-)

5:16 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

ouch!!

4:30 AM  
Blogger Pranay the Srinivasan said...

a love struck romeo...
singing a street song serenade..
laying everybody low...
with this love song that he made...
finds a convenient streetlight...

steps out of the shade, and says:

You and me, babe. How about it??

12:15 AM  

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