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Friday, August 19, 2005

Shut up!

Go away.
Leave me alone.
No!
Don’t.
Stay?
Talk?

Even demons in the mind
can become friends in time.

11 Comments:

Anonymous abe said...

wow!

6:44 PM  
Blogger Shyam said...

heh... i honestly dont know whether to laugh, cry or be scared... how much you can say in so few words, Ms Katli!

10:09 PM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

I've been very tardy in my replies to all your comments. Sorry :( Thank you all so much for reading and commenting!

6:47 PM  
Blogger Shyam said...

Kaaju, please dont suddenly stop writing your lovely insightful poems... like Ammani seems to have stopped her QTs :(

9:12 PM  
Blogger thennavan said...

KK, I too noticed that Ammani's recent posts did not have the QTs. Hope you can keep yours coming :-)

5:35 PM  
Blogger Meera said...

Bravo!

12:55 PM  
Blogger Jyotsna said...

aah ,yes the demons of our mind,our inner voices are our friends and guides actually.
:)

3:58 PM  
Blogger romantic by twilight said...

super!

7:47 PM  
Blogger Dan Husain said...

this is lovely! :-)

11:22 PM  
Blogger suniti said...

To quote Abe, 'WOW' :))

10:06 PM  
Blogger david raphael israel said...

mmm -- the structure & surprise are wonderful; where the context is only revealed at conclusion. (This could be an interesting "basic form" in series, perhaps.)

4:53 PM  

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