Shut up!
Go away.
Leave me alone.
No!
Don’t.
Stay?
Talk?
Even demons in the mind
can become friends in time.
Leave me alone.
No!
Don’t.
Stay?
Talk?
Even demons in the mind
can become friends in time.
posted by kaaju katli | 4:17 PM
11 Comments:
wow!
heh... i honestly dont know whether to laugh, cry or be scared... how much you can say in so few words, Ms Katli!
I've been very tardy in my replies to all your comments. Sorry :( Thank you all so much for reading and commenting!
Kaaju, please dont suddenly stop writing your lovely insightful poems... like Ammani seems to have stopped her QTs :(
KK, I too noticed that Ammani's recent posts did not have the QTs. Hope you can keep yours coming :-)
Bravo!
aah ,yes the demons of our mind,our inner voices are our friends and guides actually.
:)
super!
this is lovely! :-)
To quote Abe, 'WOW' :))
mmm -- the structure & surprise are wonderful; where the context is only revealed at conclusion. (This could be an interesting "basic form" in series, perhaps.)
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