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Monday, September 12, 2005

Both

feet in
sticky gloom;
like chewing gum
on the underside
of bata chappels,

that won’t hold tight
yet won’t let go.

6 Comments:

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12:14 PM  
Blogger Shyam said...

Me likey! The comparison is odious :)

3:25 PM  
Anonymous abe said...

nice.

reminds me to be careful what i step in

5:01 PM  
Blogger Jyotsna said...

i second this totally especially the sticky gloom bit..Gloom can be as sticky if not stickier than gum!

1:02 PM  
Blogger ammani said...

Very nice. Been there, been that.

1:16 PM  
Blogger Chanakya said...

Good writing. Lot to learn.

Thanks.

1:36 PM  

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