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Wednesday, October 19, 2005

Swollen

veins
on papery arms,
so green.

9 Comments:

Blogger Dan Husain said...

Oops...i am suddenly aware of the veins in my arm...lovely! :-)

2:37 AM  
Blogger The ramblings of a shoe fiend said...

i love all of them. btw u can send ur shoes to No 31, Salisbury Square...

5:01 PM  
Blogger Shyam said...

wow, mini-haikus! I thought haikus were short, but you have 'em beat! I counted the syllables in these four pomes - 11 was the most. :) Love 'em - this one in particular reminded me of my grandma's skinny arms when she was 86 - paper-thin skin with prominent veins :)

11:39 PM  
Blogger Aravind said...

stray, tear, listless and swollen too...?!!!
Loved stray and tear especially. Did you notice, you can add your "stray" and "tear" at the end of the poems also...making a nice haiku!

4:54 AM  
Blogger thennavan said...

Happy Deepavali KK :-)

1:40 AM  
Blogger www.gypsynan.blogspot.com said...

nicely done!!!

3:24 AM  
Blogger Anjali said...

veins and and no wanes in the verse

9:29 PM  
Anonymous abe said...

isn't it time the clavicle returned? long time.

4:48 PM  
Blogger The ramblings of a shoe fiend said...

i agree with abe! where are you?

5:58 PM  

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