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Tuesday, October 11, 2005

Clouds

Fluffy floating
bathtubs
for soiled angels.











Written for a word picture exercise on SC&Co.

8 Comments:

Anonymous Tangent said...

Nice.
Reminds me of Vairamuthu's lines..written in the 70's)

10:01 AM  
Blogger The ramblings of a shoe fiend said...

u got me smiling first thing in the morning :D thanks

2:24 PM  
Blogger david raphael israel said...

rathaer than Megadhutam,
you have a Megadbathtub.

11:50 AM  
Blogger david raphael israel said...

(ps - just added you to my blogo-list of blogs I browse - i.e., links)

ps: i think the incongrous (perhaps) sound of "bathtub" in your poem is part of its quaint quiddity

12:14 PM  
Blogger Shyam said...

awww... sweet!

3:08 PM  
Blogger Aravind said...

clean angels
crying clouds,
green earth-
smile.

Excellent, as always

PS: not so good as yours, but inspired from "clouds" :-)

8:54 AM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

tangent - can you send me those lines by email? thanks!

shoe fiend - so glad :-D

d.i - honoured!

shyam, aravind - thank you so much

2:13 PM  
Blogger Known Stranger said...

hmm true its a pain one should learn to live and sustain. Actually speaking longing to have on pain of that reall kind to feel it. what we really long lure us. right. ha ha ha ah

2:21 PM  

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