Clouds
Fluffy floating
bathtubs
for soiled angels.
Written for a word picture exercise on SC&Co.
bathtubs
for soiled angels.
Written for a word picture exercise on SC&Co.
posted by kaaju katli | 1:50 PM
posted by kaaju katli | 1:50 PM
8 Comments:
Nice.
Reminds me of Vairamuthu's lines..written in the 70's)
u got me smiling first thing in the morning :D thanks
rathaer than Megadhutam,
you have a Megadbathtub.
(ps - just added you to my blogo-list of blogs I browse - i.e., links)
ps: i think the incongrous (perhaps) sound of "bathtub" in your poem is part of its quaint quiddity
awww... sweet!
clean angels
crying clouds,
green earth-
smile.
Excellent, as always
PS: not so good as yours, but inspired from "clouds" :-)
tangent - can you send me those lines by email? thanks!
shoe fiend - so glad :-D
d.i - honoured!
shyam, aravind - thank you so much
hmm true its a pain one should learn to live and sustain. Actually speaking longing to have on pain of that reall kind to feel it. what we really long lure us. right. ha ha ha ah
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