Yes
I could write today
of things left unsaid
if only it wouldn’t
hurt so much;
I could write today
of things left undone
if only it wouldn’t
tear me to shreds;
I could write today
of the untouched,
unclaimed, untorn good,
I would probably
write today
if only I could.
of things left unsaid
if only it wouldn’t
hurt so much;
I could write today
of things left undone
if only it wouldn’t
tear me to shreds;
I could write today
of the untouched,
unclaimed, untorn good,
I would probably
write today
if only I could.
posted by kaaju katli | 1:02 PM
11 Comments:
a hint of poignancy and longing!You could write,yes!
:)
Indi, this is striking.
"untorn" suggests interesting idealism perhaps.
Vaguely reminds of Zhuang-ze (Chuang-Tsu)'s expression: "the Uncarved Block" (aka God, one could say).
I want to read more of your words...
where'd the clavicle go one wonders?
d.i.
Have said it before, will probably say it plenty of times again - LOVELY :)
this was a good one i read with lot of hidden meanings
I could write today
of fears within
if only it wouldn't
reveal my desires
Your words are always a treat. They leave me feeling as if I just met someone who wouldn't lie....not necessarily reveal all...but definitely not lie
:)
Thank you for visiting and commenting :)
I feel the exact same way :)
love the way u write..
few words but the impact of a bible.
this is lovely! but please do write irrespective of what toll it takes on you! :-))
A lot of things left unsaid, I do agree; silence would only hurt more,
sometimes even the word "yes" comes back to haunt you......
did you ever want to say "yes" but did not..?
something that comes back to haunt you...??
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