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Tuesday, October 11, 2005


I could write today
of things left unsaid
if only it wouldn’t
hurt so much;
I could write today
of things left undone
if only it wouldn’t
tear me to shreds;

I could write today
of the untouched,
unclaimed, untorn good,

I would probably
write today
if only I could.


Blogger Jyotsna said...

a hint of poignancy and longing!You could write,yes!

3:41 PM  
Blogger david raphael israel said...

Indi, this is striking.
"untorn" suggests interesting idealism perhaps.
Vaguely reminds of Zhuang-ze (Chuang-Tsu)'s expression: "the Uncarved Block" (aka God, one could say).

I want to read more of your words...
where'd the clavicle go one wonders?

11:55 AM  
Blogger Shyam said...

Have said it before, will probably say it plenty of times again - LOVELY :)

3:08 PM  
Blogger Known Stranger said...

this was a good one i read with lot of hidden meanings

5:21 PM  
Blogger Asmita said...

I could write today
of fears within
if only it wouldn't
reveal my desires

11:37 PM  
Blogger Asmita said...

Your words are always a treat. They leave me feeling as if I just met someone who wouldn't lie....not necessarily reveal all...but definitely not lie


12:09 AM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

Thank you for visiting and commenting :)

2:35 PM  
Blogger Sakshi said...

Very well put.

2:15 PM  
Blogger Meera said...

I feel the exact same way :)

4:01 PM  
Blogger sonu said...

love the way u write..
few words but the impact of a bible.

10:34 PM  
Blogger Dan Husain said...

this is lovely! but please do write irrespective of what toll it takes on you! :-))

10:08 AM  

A lot of things left unsaid, I do agree; silence would only hurt more,
sometimes even the word "yes" comes back to haunt you......
did you ever want to say "yes" but did not..?
something that comes back to haunt you...??

11:26 AM  

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