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Thursday, April 27, 2006

Surprise

Freshly startled
by an old wound;
didn't know it could
still do that

11 Comments:

Blogger Has to be me said...

Not to worry....it wud get healed soon. :)

9:55 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Looking for my long lost wounded friend!!! Not trying to heal, just trying to be...
kundu maami :)

11:41 PM  
Blogger david raphael israel said...

Indi--

glad to have words of yours
sorry for pains
skycrossing birds of yours
needn't be cranes

freshly perplexed by a
new ambiguity
didn't perceive it could
wreak continuity

--------
cheers,
d.i.
[word verification: "megji"]

8:40 AM  
Blogger Jyotsna said...

Yes,old wounds never fail to startle but they also help heal..by making one resilient.
heal soon and lots of love to you
J

1:49 PM  
Blogger Nessa said...

Happens to me when I think of my first boyfriend.. and then, almost immediately all the good things about the present come back to me.. and the old wound is buried again.. It's best to let go of some things..

5:30 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Scars are paraded

in mutual one-upmanship
Mine hurt more than yours!

in imagined comraderie
"I got hurt too!"

as emotional bait
"Kissy kissy where it hurts, please"

and sometimes, surprisingly
we discover they still hurt.

9:23 PM  
Blogger Pragya said...

At packing a punch, with brevity, you are the best!

Pragya

7:11 AM  
Blogger Wanderer said...

wounds heal but scars remain
till some things notch at the memory strings
and all one remembers is the pain.

12:44 PM  
Blogger Mohit said...

Glad that I hit this blog

12:33 AM  
Blogger Pranay the Srinivasan said...

stand still.
remember nothing?
good.
that will be
a thousand bucks.

a
box of pills
for you.
good boy.

utekkare,
pranay

12:36 AM  
Blogger Gowthaman said...

No matter how many times I read this "Surprise" it continues to "Surpirse" me!

10:13 PM  

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