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Thursday, November 17, 2005

Baked

a cake today
and left it to rise,
and how it rose.
An orange cinnamon
ball of warm love that
couldn’t be contained;
So I let it go whole,
untasted, untouched,
heavenwards
to you.



Written for an exercise on SC&Co with a picture for inspiration.

9 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

a bit of magic realism?

anyway, a little bit real magic on this page.

4:08 PM  
Blogger The ramblings of a shoe fiend said...

nice to see you back after so long! lovely

6:00 PM  
Blogger Shammi said...

Agree with Shoefie... at LAST an update - and what a lovely one too! :)

Bet you cant wait to meet up with Ammani, btw!

4:12 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

beautiful... brings a fuzzy warm feeling...

Vaish

10:48 AM  
Blogger Known Stranger said...

good one with an eternal touch

8:34 PM  
Blogger Narsimha said...

beautiful pic

3:36 PM  
Blogger Jyotsna said...

I thought i had left a comment here but now dont seem to find it..
this post is really thinking of "out of the box" kind..I loved it especially the manner in which you have written," An orange cinnamon ball of warm love ...

7:16 PM  
Blogger Parul Gahlot said...

I hope you don't write these words for a man... although if I were one I would want them to be written for me... selfish I guess and I'd deserve them too!
Seriously beautiful words as always

9:07 PM  
Blogger Innocent Bullet said...

cinnamon sun pales my words! lovely! :-)

1:52 AM  

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