Enough!
Enough already with
your angsty pomes!
It’s getting a little
tiresome; your tomes
of love lost, gone bad
are among the worst
that one ever saw.
Can we have less
of this Indi raw?
Written for a Caferati exercise on 'write an insulting poem on yourself' :-)
your angsty pomes!
It’s getting a little
tiresome; your tomes
of love lost, gone bad
are among the worst
that one ever saw.
Can we have less
of this Indi raw?
Written for a Caferati exercise on 'write an insulting poem on yourself' :-)
posted by kaaju katli | 6:50 PM
21 Comments:
;-)
d.i.
well written indi!
:)
Very well written, KK :)
nicely written!! appadi enna kovam unga mela? :-)
:-) Thanks! I can be vicious when I want to :p!
Is your Hindi raw too?
cheerz!
Maami, romba pramaadama irukku! Idu oru Noble Price payem! Ceremony ku marakkaame invitation kudungo! Kandippa pattu veshti kattindu varuven!
Gaad Bluss you!
:))))
MM.
oh!
ada! indi can do punny! :)
well . . .
indi raw or indi cooked
either indi cation
may be indi pendently
suitable -- "persuasion"
plosive is but fricative
is found in "indi cative"
in the mirror which one looked?
(indi raw or indi cooked?)
Can we have MORE? :)
Although written for an exercise, your poem has passion and understated anger. Very controlled piece of writing. Glad I stumbled into your blog.
nice!
NICE
clavicular returnment is inquired of
vehicular discernment is desired of
empty air (it holds potential of your landing)
we sit in awe albeit sans understanding
hey first time here. like your wiritng. particularly surprise, blank and flattery . !
Not really insulting as it has been so well put!Nice... :)
hey kaaju
how about some fresh stock of katlis?
long time no eat
word verification: rtbrs - return to blogging, reluctant sage(ess?)
came looking for something new...
I guess you have decided to stop posting. I am an addict though - can't stop,
i join tilo when i say, 'my name is abe, and i'm a katliholic.'
please may we have some more?
word verification - otmsoife:
oh the memories sweet,
of indi's fabulous epistles
please come back
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