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Tuesday, May 02, 2006

Enough!

Enough already with
your angsty pomes!
It’s getting a little
tiresome; your tomes
of love lost, gone bad
are among the worst
that one ever saw.
Can we have less
of this Indi raw?






Written for a Caferati exercise on 'write an insulting poem on yourself' :-)

22 Comments:

Blogger david raphael israel said...

;-)
d.i.

5:06 AM  
Blogger Jyotsna said...

well written indi!
:)

7:08 PM  
Blogger Nessa said...

Very well written, KK :)

11:57 AM  
Blogger Mukund said...

nicely written!! appadi enna kovam unga mela? :-)

12:19 PM  
Blogger kaaju katli said...

:-) Thanks! I can be vicious when I want to :p!

3:34 PM  
Blogger Max Babi said...

Is your Hindi raw too?

cheerz!

9:05 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Maami, romba pramaadama irukku! Idu oru Noble Price payem! Ceremony ku marakkaame invitation kudungo! Kandippa pattu veshti kattindu varuven!

Gaad Bluss you!

:))))

MM.

6:09 PM  
Blogger tangled said...

oh!

4:56 AM  
Blogger ammani said...

ada! indi can do punny! :)

5:13 PM  
Blogger david raphael israel said...

well . . .


indi raw or indi cooked
either indi cation
may be indi pendently
suitable -- "persuasion"
plosive is but fricative
is found in "indi cative"
in the mirror which one looked?
(indi raw or indi cooked?)

8:17 AM  
Blogger Gangadhar said...

wow..verywell written!!

5:50 PM  
Anonymous shyam1969 said...

Can we have MORE? :)

3:44 PM  
Blogger Ashish Gorde said...

Although written for an exercise, your poem has passion and understated anger. Very controlled piece of writing. Glad I stumbled into your blog.

11:28 AM  
Blogger Jasmeen said...

nice!

2:04 AM  
Blogger Jasmeen said...

NICE

2:05 AM  
Blogger david raphael israel said...

clavicular returnment is inquired of
vehicular discernment is desired of
empty air (it holds potential of your landing)
we sit in awe albeit sans understanding

6:57 PM  
Blogger lemontree said...

hey first time here. like your wiritng. particularly surprise, blank and flattery . !

6:22 PM  
Blogger lovemarks said...

Not really insulting as it has been so well put!Nice... :)

12:41 PM  
Anonymous abe said...

hey kaaju

how about some fresh stock of katlis?

long time no eat

word verification: rtbrs - return to blogging, reluctant sage(ess?)

9:27 AM  
Blogger tilotamma said...

came looking for something new...

8:01 PM  
Blogger tilotamma said...

I guess you have decided to stop posting. I am an addict though - can't stop,

8:31 PM  
Anonymous abe said...

i join tilo when i say, 'my name is abe, and i'm a katliholic.'

please may we have some more?

word verification - otmsoife:
oh the memories sweet,
of indi's fabulous epistles


please come back

10:22 AM  

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